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Round Robin Stories

Round Robin Story #1

3 new additions since 9/05/07

Round Robin Story #2

14 new addition since 9/30/07

Round Robin Story #3

8 new additions since 10/17/07

Round Robin Story #4

1 new additions since 11/04/07

Round Robin Story #5

1 new additions since 11/12/07

Round Robin Story #6

2 new additions since 11/17/07

Round Robin Story #7

2 new addition since 12/7/07

Round Robin Story #8

1 new addition since 12/27/07

Round Robin Story #9

1 new addition since

1/15/08

Round Robin Story #10

1 new addition since

3/30/08

 

NOTE: All submissions are sent to Mr. Frost before they are posted on the web.

This page is for each student to write stories, poems, etc. under his or her name. Do not change anyone else's story. Stories must be APPROPRIATE. Also, don't use last names.

Chose from the links to the right to access individual student stories or notes.

At the beginning, there is a round robin story that everybody can add to. When it is done, we will probably have a story that is crazy and hilarious!

Click here to add to a Round Robin Story or to start a new one.


ROUND ROBIN STORY #1 2007

The field was full of students hopping around like rabbits as they searched for plants. Each student was very excited to find extraordinary plants. It was a beautiful day and the plants looked beautiful! But one of us noticed something strange moving in the bushes.

WE didn't know what it was, so scared and afraid, we went to check it out. As the kids pulled away the bushes Mr. Frost said it was time to go. So all the students scrambled to line. Once they got back to the classroom, Mr. Frost told everyone to write what they thought it was. Everyone moaned. Not another writing project they thought.

But as their pencils twirled and scribbled, the air also began to twirl. Rachael noticed a sucking noise behind her. All of the sudden Rachel got sucked into a black hole. The Whole class gasped then Rachael C. got sucked into the hole two. Everyone wondered where they had gone. Both of them were soaring in a dark tunnel with no light and creaking noises.

Back in the classroom: "Maybe it was the thing we heard in the bushes," said Shawn.

The black hole twirled around the classroom as everyone ducked and screamed.

Mr. Frost said to everyone in the class not to worry but right when he said that we all found our selves in a pitch black room. When they heard a noise. Everyone jumped.

They were very scared then Mike L. heard someone yelling, ''HELP'' ''HELP''!!!

Then there was the patter of little feet. Everybody crowded together, accidentally bumping into each other. No one knew who was who? All they knew was that someone else was there.

There was a small shining light in the corner high above everyone's heads when a fairy popped up behind it and said," Are you Jack Frost?" she said pointing to Mr. Frost. "It looks like you brought all your little elves too!" She said pointing to the class.

Mr. Frost gave the fairy a strange look , then he vanished so did the fairy so it was just the kids all 21 was as scared as a rabbit getting chased by a wolf.

Then, as Sam was tying her shoes (in case they had to run), she found a glowing silver key. Slowly, she put her fingers around it and felt an icy chill run into her bones. Sam announced it to the whole class.

They all searched for a door then Mike L. fell into a deep hole Tommy was the first person to notice that he was gone then he fell too.

Sam fiddled with the key in her hands and had a strange felling inside, I recognize this she thought.

Sarah was the first to notice Sam missing then looked in the corner and saw Sam lying unconsciously. All the kids rushed over to Sam.

Ashley peeled back Sam's eyelids to only find white eyeballs. All the kids screamed.

Mike A had just noticed. "Where's the key Sam had"?

A faint glow had grown and Sam vanished just like mr.frost and the fairy. All of a sudden there was a rumbling noise. "POW! BOOM! BANG!" A flash of lightning struck the sky.

"Hello there! My name is Maryanne."

Everyone's heads turned to the back of the room. A tall princess with a pink dress was standing motioning us all to come into the gnome hole.

All the kids ran over to the princess. There was a small hole in the just like in the classroom!

"How do we get in?" asked Trevor. "why you just slip in like this"

Maryanne put her right arm in and just got sucked up.

As soon as all the kids were in they came out into a happy world with rainbows and flowers.

All the boys moaned.

"This is where Mr.. frost and probably went" said mike L.

"Alright lets split into teams boys look for Mr.. frost girls look for Sam. Got it?" said Kevin.

All the kids nodded and split up.

"MR. FROST! MR. FROST! WHERE ARE YOU!!" the boys called out. They heard something in the bushes and began to run

"WHOA!!" all the boys cried as they fell down a hole which led them back in to the pitch black room. They heard footsteps and looked up.

"Mr. Frost! your back!!" said the boys.

"I am back. but where are the girls?" asked Mr. Frost.

But before anyone could answer, Seth noticed something different about Mr. Frost. He was just as tall. He had the same face. But his body was covered in fur . . . he had been turned into a giant woodchuck. "Mr. Frost!" yelled Seth. "You're a . . . a woodchuck!"

"What happened?" asked Mike A.

"Nothing happened," Mr. Frost said "I just took a walk in happy land!"

Carolyn noticed a pile of leaves and bent down to pick it up when it suddenly rumbled. She screamed and ran to the other girls.

They all lined up toughest to weakest and walked over to the mysterious plant. It rumbled again. They did not scream for they were too scared to say anything.

Up popped a glowing Sam with a key in her hand. Sam moaned and made a small grunting noise in her stomach. Just then Sam said "'bout time you found me I've been here for hours."

"Why are you glowing Sam?" Asked Trevor.

"How much wood could a wood chuck chuck if a wood chuck could chuck M. Frost?" said Seth
 

``Oh I am. I knew I felt a little warm but AAAAHHHHH I`M GLOWING`` Sam screamed for every one in happy land to hear.

 Patrick walked over to Sam. "Where is Tommy?"

 "I saw him but then that big whole sucked him in. But he is not here."

The whole class searched. Mr. Frost did not like this, neither did anyone else




Do not change anyone's work!

Student Stories & Notes

Fourth Grade Class of 2007

Fourth Grade Class of 2008

2 new additions since 9/05/07

Outside submissions!

11/11/07

Hi everyone!  I am Mr. Frost's mom and Jackson's Mi Ma.  I have heard that you are a great class.  I look forward to reading your stories.  Did you know that I am retired after teaching for about thirty years?  Have a great year.

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  Round Robin Story #2:  THE FIELD TRIP


Once upon a time there were 17 kids in a class and they wanted to go on a field trip. So they did.

When they got there it looked super scary.

Later they heard moaning so they stayed with Mr. Frost. When the moaning stopped they heard bats screaming at the top of their lungs.

"What's that sound?" Abby asked as she stared blankly at the big museum with cobwebs on it in front of her.

``Probably a haunted museum,`` Matthew said.

`Well I am staying out here,`` Sarah said.

"What are you afraid of, you think miniatures will come out and make us bow down to there tinyness?`` Catlin said

``Yeah,`` Sarah answered and just after that miniature came pouring out of the museum doors. Everyone's jaw dropped in astonishment.

Rachael started to run but she accidentally tripped over her shoe lace. That made her hit the floor with a big bang. Everyone gasped in a way that said are you okay.

Racheal wasn`t ok. She had hurt her ankle.

Mr. Frost had to carry her away from the little miniatures. Everyone ran into the woods. Until they heard someone playing the flute.

After the flute stopped little flying things came and started to bite them all like crazy.

``What were those things?`` asked Paul.

``Pixies, they are in my book and that is exactly the thing they did to the main characters, Daphne and Sabrina.`` Caitlin answered.

`PLEASE try to be realistic for two seconds.`` Ryan replied.

``What is your brilliant idea of what they are then?`` Caitlin answered back.

``I don`t know but I do know they are NOT pixies,`` Ryan answered.

``I don`t even think they exist.`` Mr. Frost added.

"I think I am dreaming. This seems too much like a fantasy story. It can't  be happening." Abby remarked as she gazed at her confused classmates.

"Mr. Frost how do you know they don't exist if you haven't read The Sisters Grimm?" Caitlin said matter of factly.

Rachael came limping back over to the other 16 kids.

"Guys there is a big spider on my head," said Nolan. "Ahhhh! It bit me."

Soon spiders began to crawl off the old building. The class screamed like hyenas after a  spooky-looking spider as big as a hand bit Mr. Frost.

All of a sudden hair began to come off his skin.

Everyone screamed in disbelief. Then to make things worse Abi fainted.

Everyone but Nolan cried because of frustration and from being scared. As for Nolan  looked strange, very strange. His skin started rapidly bubbling as if it where changing, it did. He turned into the big bad wolf. Everyone ran but something stopped them. Two thins. 1) On the inside is it still really Nolan? 2) How could they leave Rachael, Mr. Frost, and Abi alone with this creature. What were they going to do? They wondered until they thought of something.

After Abi fainted people wanted to give up. They knew no matter what things would just get worse and worse for the remaining kids. They had given up and no matter how hard they tried to keep there heads up high, it fell back down. There heads seemed to sag miserably. They knew this was the end, they knew it.

Finally, someone talked we could tell it was Adam because he had a squeak of depression in his words. "Guys, since Mr. Frost is so weak from the bite and the bus driver isn't coming back till` three and it's only 9:00, someone needs to take charge, to be our leader. Any nominations? A boy and a girl. People who will work well together no matter which 2 people. Who's it gonna be?"

 
  Round Robin Story #3: The Big Journey


There are two people named Nolan and Caitlin. They were going on a journey to Owl Land. They were going to Owl Land to find there Snowy owl, Fluffy. Somebody named Harry Potter stole Fluffy, but called her by the name Hedwig. So Nolan and Caitlin went on their journey.

But they suddenly stopped in the middle of the ocean to see a girl swimming toward the boat. Then Caitlin noticed it was her friend, Abby.

Nolan said, "Hi!!!!"

Abby came in the boat soaked and they went off to Sports Land.

There they saw Nolan's friend Adam playing football. They scared him and by accident he threw the ball at Nolan's head.

"Ow!" Nolan said.

By the next day they were at Owl Land. They settled it with Harry and found out what really happened. Then they got Fluffy back forever and ever.

Later on Nolan, Caitlin, Abby, and Adam were sitting on the island. Out in the distance they saw a shadow figure.

"Is that Sarah," questioned Caitlin.

"It looks like it's Samantha," said Nolan.

"Its not Samantha or Sarah. It's Rachael!" called out Adam.

Abby saw a blurry figure out in the distance. She figured out it was Madison by her beautiful golden hair. "Hi." Abby waved to her friend.

Sarah walked up behind them. "Where did you come from?" said Nolan.

"I swam. I was calling for you the whole time. I almost drowned."

Everyone watched as the boat floated away.

"Uh oh!" everyone said.

" Somebody go look for help!" Abi cried as she jumped up and down as if she was on a pogo stick. " Those spiders are probably dangerous."

"I thought all we needed was the boat. What do spiders have to do with anything?" asked Nolan.  "WAIT THERE ARE SPIDERS HERE?!?!?!! WAIT are there? Will someone PLEASE tell me if there are any spiders." Caitlin said obviously scared of spiders. "I guess there can be, Pretty big ones too. Adam said as if to scare the socks off of Caitlin. "AAAAAHHHHHH!!" Screamed (obviously) Caitlin.

 

 
 

Round Robin Story #4: Magic Island


Once there was two boys named Matthew and Nolan. They were going back to their mother's house but for some reason the train flew off the track and landed on a strange island.

"Where are we?" said Matthew.

"I don't know," answered Nolan. All of a sudden when Nolan and Matthew got off the train, they discovered that they had magic. When they found out they had magic they decided to have fun with it. So Nolan and Matthew started a magic fight.

Matthew gave Nolan crab legs, and then Nolan gave Matthew three heads. After that they changed themselves back to normal but then they discovered they have to fight crime.

Two days later they returned back home. Or did they........

 

 
 

Round Robin Story #5: The Talking Banana (to be proofread)


Once there was a taking banana  and  a couple boys named Ryan Paul, Adam, Nolan they were friends in the same class so they get to spend a lot of time together . So they were over Paul’s house so he has this tree fort in the woods people say there  is something’s in  there and then they all agree to go in and see what is in there because they were having a sleep over so they in the woods  and there going to Paul’s tree house and they say they here something so they get to his tree house and they see something  the color yellow so then they see a banana so Adam says they should  get it and then eat it for a snack so they do then it starts to run so then Nolan says what the heck was that?????!!!!! So then they still see it so they  start to chase it went so fast and really CRAZY .

And then it got dark they could not see so then Ryan hears something that scares them it was a MONKEY!!!!! And he was going to get the banana but Adam used his fast reflexes to get it be for the monkey. Ryan Paul, Nolan all said you rock and then something else said “you go “ !! and Paul said “where did that come from “???????It was me a voice said it was the  BANANA!!!!!!! Wow ! Then they showed the president and said they were crazy so they ate the banana.
                  THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 
 

Round Robin Story #6

Mrs. Beal made one more green swoop on the quiz on her desk, smiling at her student's work. This week had been one of those weeks that every teacher dreams about: excited chatter about what they were reading, visible light bulbs going off over everyone's head during math, and dirty, eager fingers examining the parts of a flowering plant. Then there were the thank yous and have a good days as she dismissed their smiling faces to the buses. Mrs. Beal closed her eyes and let out one long contented breath while laying her pen to the side of the corrected papers. She almost regretted leaving for the weekend.

But from outside the bright sunshine of her thoughts, Mrs. Beal heard a noise. A clanking, or a clinking noise. No a rattling. Mrs. Beal opened her eyes to thin slits as if to increase her ability to hear. Nothing.

Silly me! she thought. Probably just Mr. Clembly and his keys. Mrs. Beal giggled and rose from her chair, noticing for the first time that night have arrived.

"Goodness me," she said. "Time has really flown." And just as she bent down to the side of her desk to retrieve her pocket book, the jingling started up again. This time, she knew where it was coming from.

Crooking her head to the side, she peered over at the large rectangular vent hole in the wall. The chain that hung there trembled and swung and then jerked!

A little tiny foot appeared inside the little brown hole.

 

 
  Round Robin #7


I'm Unlucky, started by Samantha Foley

I'm so unlucky because I stubbed my toe, then I fell in snow [without a coat and hat] I went to school and got a F, then fell on my friend Beth. I accidentally went home on the bus, then I started to fuss. When I got home I was feeling blue, then I lost my left shoe. Today I got sick, I had the flue. I had to miss school oh I'm so blue. On Christmas I got socks, then I got the chicken pocks. When I went to school one day they wouldn't let me go out to play. I'm so unlucky I can't believe how its already Christmas Eve. I have to get a present, then I met a peasant. He came to me to see if I got my Christmas tree. I said yes, but you are a pest. He walked away to his sleigh. I felt bad and very sad because I was mean to my dad. I slipped on ice and fell on my head now I'm stuck in this hospital bed. I went to Rome I want to go home. Its so bad that I'm sad.

I went to school one day, then I rode on a sleigh. I'm so happy, I got to eat taffy. I gave a present to that peasant. I was nice to my dad, I'm not sad. I ate a chip and didn't trip. I did not fall in a waterfall. I did not trip, on my friend Kip. On Christmas, I found my left shoe I was so happy I went to the zoo. I got a teddy bear, I named him Freddy Bear. He was so cool he went to school. I want to fly in the sky. My wish came true, I have wings to. I'm so high in the sky oh no got to fly!!!!!!!

I watched as the birds flew by. They fluttered fastly- oh my!!!!

 

 
 

Round Robin #8
 

I met a cowboy named Joe who lost his toe while riding on his buffalo. Its name was loo loo she was very coo coo she went crack crack while standing on my back pack. My backpack went moo moo I thought I was coo coo but my friend sue herd it too!

 
  Round Robin #9: The Cookie

One day I was wandering aimlessly and pondered upon a cookie...
 "YUM..." said Nolan.
Crunch
"OW MY COOKIE!!"

 
  Round Robin #10: The Ferrets
Cody


THE FERRET
        
(CHAPTER 1 BRAKE OUT)   ONCE THEIR WAS A FERRET NAMED SNOWBALL AND SHE WAS VERY FUN TO PLAY WITH. BUT ONE DAY HIS OWNER GOT SO BOARD THAT THE FERRET DECIDED TO RUN AWAY! SO THE FERRET RAN AWAY THAT NIGHT. EVEN ALL OF THE OTHER FERRETS FROM HOUSES AND ALL OF THE PET STORES THE FERRETS SAID "WHERE ARE WE GOING?." AND SNOWBALL SAID "THE JUNKYARD" AND THE FERRETS SAID "WHAT?." "YA THE JUNKYARD" SAID SNOWBALL NO, NO, NO SAID SKUNK "I'M ALL READY STINKY AND DIRTY". SO SKUNK JUST WENT BACK HOME.


(CHAPTER 2 THE CHINCHILLA'S)   THEN EVERYONE WENT WITH SNOWBALL AND SNOWBALL SAID "TO THE JUNKYARD!". AFTER 25 MINUTES THEY FINALLY WHERE AT THE JUNKYARD. THEY LIVED THERE FOR 15 DAYS ON THE 15TH THEY SAW SOMETHING MOVING IN THE TRASH AND IT WAS A ARMY OF CHINCHILLA'S. AND THE FERRETS HAD A ARMY TOO FOR THE FERRET ARMY THEIR WAS 650 FERRETS. FOR THE CHINCHILLA'S ARMY THEIR WAS 650 CHINCHILLA'S. THEY SAID HI BUT THE CHINCHILLA'S DIDN'T WHY WELL THEY DIDN'T SAY HI BECAUSE THEY WERE SHY.


(CHAPTER 3  THE FRIENDS)      AFTER 5 DAYS THE CHINCHILLA'S STOPPED BEING SHY SO THEY TOLD SNOWBALL THAT THEY BE BEST FRIENDS NOT ENEMIES SO DAYS LATER THEY WERE MAKING LITTLE VILLAGES BY VILLAGES THEY MEAN BY HOMES, SHOPS, PARKS, RESTAURANTS  BUT...


(CHAPTER 4  STORMY NIGHT)            ONE NIGHT IT WAS A DARK AND STORMY NIGHT. A MINI TORNADO CAME TO THE JUNKYARD AND SKUNK JUST WAS WATCHING THAT WAS HAPPENING AT THE JUNKYARD SKUNK GOT A BATH FINALLY AND PUT ON THE TORNADO SHIELD AND SKUNK ACROSS THE STREET HE GOT TO THE JUNKYARD IT WAS LOCKED. SO SKUNK WENT BACK HOME HE MADE SOME MUSCLE. HE RIPPED THE LOCK OPEN HE GRABBED ALL 1300 FERRETS AND CHINCHILLAS AFTER THE TORNADO WENT AWAY SKUNK LOOKED AT ALL OF THE CHINCHILLAS AND FERRETS 1 OF THE CHINCHILLAS FAINTED


 (CHAPTER 5 SAD SKUNK?)

 
 
 

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